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2.0/ 5
DevelopingMostly Unsuccessful
The response attempts to address the topic but is poorly elaborated and contains numerous grammatical errors that obscure meaning. Additionally, the lack of specific examples and engagement with classmates limits the effectiveness of the argument.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Acknowledges environmental concerns — “another concerns is facing an alarming rate or environmental damage using too much of animal testing is not good both for animal and enivroments.”
- Expresses a clear stance — “I believe that using animal testing has drawbacks.”
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