Back to SamplesAcademic Discussion — Sample
2.0/ 5
DevelopingPartially Successful
The response addresses the topic but lacks depth and specificity in examples. There are multiple grammatical errors that hinder clarity, and the engagement with classmates is minimal, which affects the overall effectiveness of the argument.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Acknowledges complexity of the topic — “I believe that this question is more complex than it appears at first glance.”
- Concludes with a forward-looking statement — “In conclusion, I deeply belive that schools and collegies in the future based on many policies could regulate accessability of digital tools.”
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