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2.0/ 5
DevelopingPartially Successful
The response articulates a relevant perspective on GMOs but lacks specific examples and contains several grammatical errors. While the argument is coherent, it would benefit from deeper engagement with the topic and more varied sentence structures.
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Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Acknowledges complexity — “Genetically modified organisms have a variety of benefits which becomes ever more important as population crisis and climate change becomes prominent.”
- Balanced perspective — “In my opinion, they should be responsibily used.”
- Identifies ethical concerns — “GMOs can facilitate corporate control of seed use which raises ethical concerns about food sovereignty.”
To improve
- Lack of specific examples Try: Provide specific examples of sustainable farming practices and how they can complement the use of GMOs.
- Vague elaboration Try: Clarify what specific cases might warrant the use of GMOs and why alternatives are harder to implement in those scenarios.
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