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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The response effectively argues for the use of GMOs to combat food shortages, but it lacks specific examples and deeper engagement with classmates' ideas. Minor grammatical errors are present, which affect the overall clarity of the argument.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Highlights benefits — “highlighting their benefits in addressing food shortages and resisting pests”
To improve
- Lack of specific examples Try: Include specific examples of GMO crops that have successfully addressed food shortages, such as drought-resistant corn in Africa.
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