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2.0/ 5
DevelopingPartially Successful
The response outlines some benefits of GMOs but lacks specific examples and contains several grammatical errors. Additionally, it does not engage with other students' ideas, which limits its effectiveness in the discussion.
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Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Acknowledges potential benefits of GMOs — “GMO crops's production is higher, which means the productivity increase and more people can be feed at the same time.”
- Mentions economic benefits — “Without spending too much time taking care of the crops, farmer can imput their labor into something more valuable.”
- Recognizes health concerns — “However the concerns regarding health is also important.”
To improve
- Vague elaboration Try: Provide specific examples of countries or regions where GMOs have successfully alleviated food shortages.
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