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2.0/ 5
DevelopingLimited to Partial Success
The response presents a relevant topic but lacks sufficient elaboration and clarity. Numerous grammatical errors and vague references to classmates weaken the overall effectiveness of the argument.
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Basic
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2.5/5
Complete response2.5/5
Addresses requirements2.5/5
Working well
- Acknowledgement of global issues — “Nowadays the worldwide population increasing each year, furthermore the global warming introduce several challenges”
- Consideration of multiple viewpoints — “I undsterstand why students 2 believes the Gmo should affect the quality of our life”
- Conclusion attempts to summarize — “To summarize, the GMO should be an accesible alternativa to the poverty people to obtained cheaper food.”
To improve
- Lack of clear elaboration Try: I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
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