Back to SamplesAcademic Discussion — Sample
2.0/ 5
DevelopingPartially Successful
The response addresses the topic of online learning and mentions classmates' views, but it lacks specific examples and contains several grammatical errors. Improved elaboration and clearer examples would enhance the overall effectiveness of the argument.
14 / 30
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Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Acknowledgment of complexity — “This question is more complex than on the first glance.”
- Use of specific example — “For example, certain specific chemistry equations is understandable with 3D explanation of reaction.”
- Consideration of multiple perspectives — “Student 1's opinion is real explanation of every day life. Also, Student 2's thoughts are valuable regarding face-to-face team working during studing.”
To improve
- Lack of depth in analysis Try: Socializing is an incredible skill that is crucial for further academic and professional careers, as it enhances teamwork and communication abilities.
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