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2.0/ 5
DevelopingPartially Successful
The response addresses the prompt and references classmates, but it lacks specific examples and contains several grammatical errors. Improving the clarity of the argument and providing concrete details would enhance the overall effectiveness.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Acknowledges multiple perspectives — “In my view, Student 1's stance is the way to go, while we should also consider Student 2's claim.”
- Recognizes the uniqueness of historical sites — “hitorical monuments are unique and old, so once they are destroyed, they can't be rebuilt.”
- Considers practical constraints — “if goverments face budget constraints, they can prioritize Infrastructure development over restoration.”
To improve
- Vague elaboration Try: Therefore, I believe that a balanced approach, which considers both preservation and necessary infrastructure development, is essential for sustainable progress.
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