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2.0/ 5
DevelopingPartially Successful
The response articulates a clear stance on remote work but lacks depth in elaboration and specific examples. Additionally, there are several grammatical errors that hinder understanding, indicating a need for improvement in language accuracy.
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Basic
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Personal Experience — “For example, when I worked at home during the pandemic, I was more productive because I can work alone, in silient and no have people for distracting me.”
- Conclusion — “So, that is why I believe the remote work should be accepted in our society with a modern type of work.”
To improve
- Lack of Detailed Examples Try: I could rest more, which significantly improved my focus and efficiency during work hours.
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