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2.0/ 5
DevelopingPartially Successful
The argument is relevant and addresses the prompt effectively, particularly regarding minors' safety online. However, the response contains grammatical errors and lacks deeper engagement with classmates' viewpoints, which limits its overall effectiveness.
14 / 30
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Content
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Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
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