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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the necessary information and maintains a polite tone. However, grammatical errors and limited syntactic variety detract from the overall quality, making it a solid but not fully successful attempt.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear Introduction — “My name is Rafael and I am italian and an engineering student from MIT, especiallizing in modular construction.”
- Expresses Interest — “I am very interested in presenting my research about industrialized construction with sustainable materials.”
To improve
- Lack of Detail on How Conference Was Learned About Try: I recently learned about an academic conference in my field of study from my professor. Unfortunately, I noticed that the registration deadline has passed.
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