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4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
The email is well-structured and covers all necessary points, demonstrating a good understanding of the task. However, minor grammatical errors and slight awkwardness in phrasing affect the overall clarity and sophistication.
25 / 30
Advanced
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear expression of gratitude — “I would like to thank you for offering the online pharmaceutical marketing course.”
- Specific feedback on course content — “I have learnt a many essential concepts in this course including marketing strategies for both community pharmacy and pharmaceutical companies as well as business planning for different projects.”
- Constructive suggestions for improvement — “I suggest moving future online courses to global learning platforms such as Google or Kahoot as they are well -supported technically.”
To improve
- Spacing issue Try: well-supported
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