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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email successfully introduces the writer and expresses interest in the Eco Warriors Club, but it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improvements in clarity and vocabulary would enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses interest — “I am really interested to take part in this amazing club”
- Relevant experience — “I have experience due to my part time job, which is about recycling.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity Try: I wish to attend these events to better understand the club's goals.
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