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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main points and maintains a polite tone. However, grammatical errors and a lack of detailed elaboration on the course's value and suggestions for improvement limit its effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Valuable course content — “I have found the course very informative especially the conservation and restoration part.”
- Clear identification of issues — “First, the webpage was lagging a lot and was also crashing sometimes.”
- Constructive suggestions — “All these issues can be resolved by improving the webpage and upgrading our university's network infrastucture.”
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