Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and maintains a polite tone, which is a strength. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and vague elaboration that hinder clarity and overall effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear introduction — “I am Eliana from apartament 303.”
- Expression of understanding — “I appreciate the music, congratulations for your performance.”
To improve
- Vague request Try: would it be possible for you to lower the volume or avoid playing music late at night?
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