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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email includes a clear intent and appropriate social conventions, but it suffers from vague elaboration and multiple grammatical errors. Improving clarity and addressing the grammatical issues would enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear identification of the issue — “I am writing regarding heating system in my new apartment, No.309, second floor.”
- Availability for repair — “I will be available for any visits of workers, tomorow, based your convinience”
To improve
- Lack of specific request for temporary solutions Try: Could you suggest any temporary solutions, such as providing a space heater, until the issue is resolved?
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