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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the intent to terminate the lease early and asks relevant questions. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and a lack of syntactic variety, which impacts clarity and professionalism.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear intention — “I would like to inform you that I have to leave this apartment due to a new job offer.”
- Request for information — “I would like to know if are there penaltines for this decesion?”
To improve
- Lack of clarity Try: Finally, could you please provide more details on how to return the keys and retrieve my security deposit?
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