Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email addresses the task requirements but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors that hinder understanding. Improved sentence structure and vocabulary precision would enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2.5/5
Complete response2.5/5
Addresses requirements2.5/5
Working well
- Introduction of self and context — “My name is Salaheddine chafi from Morocco, i am considering applying to a study in Spain for next semester at the university of Spain.”
- Direct questions — “I would like to ask about housing arrangements, and if there are other options for housing.”
- Expression of gratitude — “thank you for your time.”
To improve
- Lack of specific details Try: Could you please provide details on the types of housing available and whether there are alternative options such as homestays or private rentals?
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