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2.5/ 5
FairLimited to Partial Success
The email includes a greeting and a closing, which are positive aspects. However, it suffers from numerous grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures, making it difficult to follow and diminishing its effectiveness.
16 / 30
Basic
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2.5/5
Complete response2.5/5
Addresses requirements2.5/5
Working well
- Expresses enthusiasm — “how exited I am to this great opportunity and meeting you”
- Mentions specific project — “these sustainable markiting straregies, that we discussed eralier”
- Expresses desire to join the team — “I am greatly happy to be part of your company as an marketing intern”
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