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2.0/ 5
DevelopingMostly Unsuccessful
The email addresses the main issues but lacks sufficient detail and clarity. There are multiple grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that detract from the overall effectiveness of the message.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Expressing the occasion — “I am writing to express expirence regarding my birthday's celebration”
- Acknowledging past relationship — “as a your guest a long time ago”
- Request for resolution — “I kindly sugest, as a your guest a long time ago, if it is possible give a voucher on some amount for each guest”
To improve
- Lack of specific details Try: The service was exceptionally unprofessional; for example, the staff provided incorrect information about the starter and main course.
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