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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the heating issue and its effects, demonstrating adequate elaboration. However, there are noticeable errors and limited syntactic variety, which detracts from the overall clarity and professionalism of the response.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear description of the problem — “Recently, you noticed that the heating system is not working properly, and the temperature in your apartment drops significantly at night.”
- Explanation of impact — “the temperature in your apartment drops significantly at night.”
To improve
- Lack of syntactic variety Try: Recently, I have noticed that the heating system has been malfunctioning, causing the temperature in my apartment to drop significantly at night.
- Request for specific timeline Try: Could you please provide a specific timeline for when the repairs will be completed?
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