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2.0/ 5
DevelopingMostly Unsuccessful
The email lacks a clear structure and contains numerous grammatical errors, making it difficult to understand. Additionally, it does not adequately express the applicant's interest in the scholarship or inquire about the decision timeline effectively.
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Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time and your assistance”
- States desire to be part of the program — “I really wish be part of this programme”
- Mentions program benefits — “The prestige and the experienced tutors”
To improve
- Lack of specific application details Try: As an applicant, I am aware of the rules, fees, and requirements of the scholarship process. My application ID is [Your Application ID].
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