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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively covers the necessary points but suffers from awkward phrasing and grammatical errors, which detract from its overall clarity. Improving the precision of language and reducing errors would enhance its effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear Purpose — “I am writing this email regarding the lecture on Octuber 25th, where you explained several concepts for the next assignment.”
- Expresses Gratitude — “I really appreciate if you could please share any resources or extra information in order to understand the last lecture.”
To improve
- Lack of Specificity Try: Please let me know your available office hours for a more detailed discussion.
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