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2.0/ 5
DevelopingMostly Unsuccessful
The email includes a greeting and sign-off but suffers from multiple grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. The elaboration is insufficient, and the request lacks politeness and clarity, which significantly impacts the overall effectiveness of the communication.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time.”
- Shows initiative — “I would like to ask could we discuss more about the apply”
- Expresses concern — “Is there any problem with my apply form.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity Try: I would like to know if there is any way to reapply for the scholarship.
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