Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and includes necessary details, but it suffers from grammatical errors and a lack of varied sentence structure. Improving language accuracy and elaboration would enhance the overall quality.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear description of the issue — “after using it for few weeks,I noticed that the battery dose not hold a charge for more than two hours,which is much shorter than the advertised time.”
- Inclusion of order details — “the order number is #124 and it was purchased on September15,2023.”
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