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2.5/ 5
FairMostly Unsuccessful
The email meets the basic requirements but lacks sufficient detail and contains several grammatical errors. Improving sentence structure and providing more specific examples would enhance clarity and effectiveness.
16 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Clear identification of the occasion — “It was a special occasion for me.”
- Direct expression of dissatisfaction — “Firstly, the service was extremely slow and, the food arrived cold.”
- Request for resolution — “I would like to ask for a refund or a disccount for next time.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: This poor service negatively impacted my enjoyment of the celebration and left me and my guests disappointed.
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