Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main issues with the new treadmills and their impact on the writer's training. However, it suffers from several grammatical errors and lacks detailed elaboration, which limits its overall effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude and positive experience — “I really enjoyed be part of this team”
- Clear expression of the issue — “I writing to express my troubles with the news treadmills”
- Includes a call to action — “therefore I hope find a quick solution of my issue”
To improve
- Lacks specific details about the treadmill issues Try: Provide specific examples of how the treadmills malfunction, such as 'The new treadmills often stop unexpectedly or have unresponsive controls, which disrupts my training sessions.'
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