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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email demonstrates an attempt to follow up professionally, but it suffers from grammatical errors and vague phrasing. Improvements in clarity and language accuracy would enhance the overall effectiveness of the message.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “I'm reaching out to express my gratitude regarding the interview opportunity”
- Reiterates interest in the position — “I would appreciate if you could provide me with this interview opportunity since I had a proper degree from Standord and I've prepared for this job since I graduated.”
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