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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the writer's intent to inquire about late registration for the conference. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which detracts from overall clarity and professionalism.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear expression of intent — “I am writing this email because I want to attend an academic conference.”
- Willingness to accommodate — “I am welling to pay extra fee for registration.”
- Expressing interest in presenting research — “I am strongly interest in presenting my research.”
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