Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email meets the basic requirements but suffers from grammatical errors and a lack of politeness in the request. The elaboration is minimal, and the tone could be improved to enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear introduction — “My name is Salahedine Chafi.I am your neighbor.”
- Expression of gratitude — “Thank you for understanding.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration in solution Try: Perhaps you could consider lowering the volume during weekdays and enjoy your music at a higher volume on weekends.
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