Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and includes necessary details, demonstrating a clear intent. However, frequent grammatical errors and limited sentence variety hinder overall clarity and professionalism.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing to complain about awrong laptop order I recentlypurshased from your online store, the order number is TP125487.”
- Specific details — “The model I ordered should have a larger RAM size, and an RTX grahics card instead of a GTX, which is very important for my rendering work since I am an architect.”
To improve
- Lack of spacing Try: inform me about the exchange process, so I could return
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