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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the urgency of the situation and requests information about the shipment. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and a lack of varied sentence structures, which detracts from overall clarity.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear statement of the problem — “I ordered Advance Business Communication book from your website on Sep 20, at check out cart it mentioned that parcel will be received by Sep 30 but I am still waiting for it as today its Oct 10.”
- Expression of urgency — “Because of that I am worried, as my classes will start on Oct 15 and every other students received their shipment on time.”
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