Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively fulfills the basic requirements of the task but suffers from several grammatical errors and vague elaboration. Improving the specificity of the request and correcting language issues would enhance the overall quality.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses appreciation — “how greatful I am that I was able to attend your workshop”
- Mentions specific interest — “One thing I particularly enjoyed was the variety of topics you have talked about under single concept”
- Request for additional resources — “I would appreicate it if you could provide me with additional resources about the digital impact on marketing”
To improve
- Lack of specificity Try: Specify which topic or concept was most impactful, such as 'the impact of social media algorithms on consumer behavior'.
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