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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email demonstrates an understanding of the task but lacks sufficient elaboration and contains several grammatical errors. The tone is polite, but the awkward phrasing and missing alternative dates hinder its effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2.5/5
Complete response2.5/5
Addresses requirements2.5/5
Working well
- Clear reference to existing appointment — “I have an appointement with the Doctor Noku next Monday for my annual checkup.”
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time and attention.”
To improve
- Lack of alternative dates or times Try: Would it be possible to reschedule my checkup for either Tuesday or Wednesday afternoon?
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