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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issues with the new equipment and the impact on the workout routine. However, it contains several spelling and grammatical errors that detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the message.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear identification of the problem — “These new machines are difficult to use and often malfuction.”
- Personal impact statement — “I workout regularly and these problems are disrupting my routine.”
To improve
- Lack of specific details Try: The buttons often become unresponsive, and the machine unexpectedly accelerates, which poses a safety risk.
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