Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email provides some valuable feedback about the course but suffers from grammatical errors and vague suggestions. Improved clarity and more specific examples would enhance the overall effectiveness of the message.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear identification of the problem — “Video map has the worst quality of all time and even I have notice that teacher sometimes freeze during lecture”
- Suggestion for improvement — “I would like to recommend using a reliable platform called Windows Meeting.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration on valuable content Try: Start by describing what you found valuable about the course content before discussing the technical issues.
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