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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and includes all required elements, but it suffers from grammatical errors and vague descriptions. Improving the specificity of the laptop features and correcting grammatical mistakes would enhance clarity and effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing to tell you about my recent purchase from your online store.”
- Order number provided — “with order number (8745) on May 20.”
To improve
- Lack of specific details Try: The laptop I expected to receive is the latest version with features such as a faster processor and a higher resolution display, whereas the one I received lacks these updates.
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