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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main issues with the treadmills but lacks specific details and clarity. There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrases that hinder understanding.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2.5/5
Complete response2.5/5
Addresses requirements2.5/5
Working well
- Clear identification — “I am Jinho Yoon”
- Direct request — “Would you notice me where the button is or could you send me some pictures of it?”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration on issues Try: Provide specific examples of how the treadmills are difficult to use, such as mentioning any error messages or specific malfunctions.
- Confusing statement Try: Clarify that the gym purchased the treadmills, not the writer, to avoid confusion.
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