Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and includes necessary details, but it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity. Improving sentence structure and correcting errors would enhance the overall quality of the response.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear mention of purchase details — “I bought the latest laptop on September 15, 2023”
- Identification of the specific issue — “the battery dones not hold a charge for more than two hours”
- Inquiry about warranty coverage — “Could you please confirm if the current warranty cover this problem?”
To improve
- Incorrect order number Try: Replace with the correct order number: 'my order TP12345'
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