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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the intent and addresses all required points, but it suffers from numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improving language accuracy and clarity would enhance the overall effectiveness of the message.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Acknowledgment of late return — “I am writing to express my sincerely apologize to return late the book”
- Explanation of need — “I was writing a academic essay about this topic because I was selected to be part of an specialized magazine in Australia”
- Offer to pay fees — “I would pay any fees if will be necessary.”
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