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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email includes a clear request and provides some context, but it suffers from grammatical issues and lacks sufficient detail. Improving sentence structure and correcting errors would enhance clarity and effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear request — “I kindly ask you for clarification about delivery process for Order 98765.”
- Attachment mention — “I attached screnshoots of my web portal and final status of delivering, but on the wrong unpropriete adress.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity Try: I need the birthday present as soon as possible. Could you please arrange for a reshipment or a refund?
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