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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email demonstrates a basic understanding of the task but suffers from several grammatical errors and a lack of detail. The tone is polite, but the language used is somewhat simplistic and contains mistakes that hinder overall clarity.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear identification — “My mane is Salahedine Chafi. I am writing email to check my scholarship application status, my ID is MAR 123456789.”
- Expression of interest — “I am very interested in the scholarship, because i want to become an electrical engineer, and this is my chance to do it.”
To improve
- Vague request Try: Could you please provide an update on the expected timeline for the scholarship decision?
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