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2.0/ 5
DevelopingMostly Unsuccessful
The email demonstrates an attempt to communicate the issue but suffers from numerous grammatical errors and vague elaboration. The tone is somewhat polite, but the lack of clarity and coherence significantly limits its effectiveness.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Clear expression of concern — “I am writing this email because I have a serious concern with your delivery service.”
- Request for a solution — “I need a quick solution.”
To improve
- Lack of detailed order information Try: Last week, I purchased a laptop from your website with order number #123456.
- Unclear description of the problem Try: I never received the package, and the delivery photo shows a doorstep that is unfamiliar to me.
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