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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email demonstrates a basic understanding of the task with an appropriate structure and intent. However, frequent grammatical errors and vague language hinder clarity and effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Provides booking details — “I had a booked flight with united airlines for Lahore with the referenec number (EF456).”
- States reason for change — “Due to some reason, my meeting had been shifted to another city because of that, I wont be able to catch it up.”
- Expresses gratitude — “I will be thankful for your assistance.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity Try: Due to a change in my meeting location, I will not be able to catch my original flight.
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