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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email demonstrates a clear interest in the internship and provides some relevant experience. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which detracts from its overall effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses passion for environmental conservation — “I am very passionate about environmental conseervation”
- Mentions relevant experience — “I was part of a great initiative at my college that was a part of a governmental project to turn spaces into green and keep spaces clean.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity in expressing application interest Try: I am eager to apply for the summer internship program offered by your organization.
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