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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main points but lacks depth in elaboration and contains several grammatical errors. The overall structure and polite tone are strengths, but the language accuracy needs improvement.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Valuable course content — “I really liked this course because it provides me with various resources about Operatng System, which enabled me to develop a deeper understanding of this topic.”
- Specific technical issue — “It took me about 10 minutes to find the definition of RAM in the Resources tab on the course website.”
- Suggestion for improvement — “I am writing an email to see if it would be possible to add a search tab or a AI copilot in the future, so that we can find materials more easily.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: I found it challenging to locate specific materials due to the current user interface design, which lacks intuitive navigation and clear categorization of resources.
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