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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email meets the basic requirements but suffers from clarity issues and several grammatical errors. The greeting is misspelled, and the overall tone lacks professionalism, which detracts from the effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear Purpose — “I am writing this email is that I need to return the book I purchased 6 days before.”
- Purchase Details — “And my buying was made at 9/1. The book Introduce to Deep Learning by Vincent White.”
- Return Policy Reference — “I saw it on your website due to your 7-day return policy I could return this book before 9/7.”
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