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2.5/ 5
FairLimited to Partial Success
The email demonstrates an understanding of the task by expressing interest and asking relevant questions. However, the numerous grammatical errors and lack of detail significantly hinder clarity and effectiveness.
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Basic
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2.5/5
Complete response2.5/5
Addresses requirements2.5/5
Working well
- Expresses interest in environmental conservation — “i am writing this email to express your interest in environmental conservation”
- Mentions relevant experience — “As an electrical engineering student that interested in clamit change and saving the plante, i would like to offer my experience in energy saving.”
- Inquires about application deadline — “Finally, could you please tell me the application deadline?”
To improve
- Incorrect expression of interest Try: i am writing this email to express my interest in environmental conservation
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