Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the purpose and maintains a polite tone, which is a strength. However, grammatical errors and awkward phrasing detract from overall clarity and professionalism.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear reference to application details — “I applied for a merit-based scholarship three weeks ago.”
- Expression of continued interest — “Express my continued interest in the scholarship.”
To improve
- Unclear timeline inquiry Try: Could you please provide an updated and accurate timeline for the decisions?
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