Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and maintains a polite tone, which is a strength. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity and sophistication.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear request for assistance — “I would greatly appreicate it if you could help with to resolve this issue and enroll in the correct course.”
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time.”
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